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跪求英文履歷(不知道能放哪裡)

我想應徵超商店員超商應該用不到英文啦~但還是想說寫一下
My name is Esther,I live in Linkou,It's a single-parent family,I always has lived with my aunt and sister .I hold a bachelor's degree with a major in Department of industrial management
and Enterprice information which was awardedto me by Aletheia University in NewTaipei in 2017.
Restaurant service staff
1.Order
2.Take a seat
3.Maintain a clean environment
4.Pay the bill
5.Introducing the menu
clerk of convenience
1.Cashier checkout
2.Pay the bill
3.Maintain a clean environment
4.Marketing products
5.stock up.stock shelve
Tea shop
1.Cashier checkout
2.Pay the bill
3.Maintain a clean environment
4.Marketing products
5.Making drinks
SkillS&Abilities
Outgoing personality with analytical, customer service, and problem solving skills.Ability to work in diverse environments and with diverse groups.
Conclusion
I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional information you require, please contact me.I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for an interview.  
2021-06-20 14:02 發佈
文章關鍵字 履歷
建議別放, 文法錯誤, 選字錯誤, 表述錯誤等等等等等一堆, 只有扣分沒有加分。

My name is Esther,I live in Linkou,It's a single-parent family,I always has lived with my aunt and sister .I hold a bachelor's degree with a major in Department ofindustrial management
and Enterprice information which was awardedto me by Aletheia University in NewTaipei in 2017.
Restaurant service staff
1. Order
2.Take a seat
3.Maintain a clean environment
4.Pay the bill
5.Introducing the menu
clerk of convenience
1.Cashier checkout
2.Pay the bill
3.Maintain a clean environment
4.Marketing products
5.stock up.stock shelve
Tea shop
1.Cashier checkout
2.Pay the bill
3.Maintain a clean environment
4.Marketing products
5.Making drinks
SkillS&Abilities
Outgoing personality with analytical, customer service, and problem solving skills.Ability to work in diverse environments and with diverse groups.
Conclusion
I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional information you require, please contact me.I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for an interview.
Liviane wrote:
我想應徵超商店員超商...(恕刪)

我英文沒很好,但仍看出不少錯誤。

還conclusion?
除了文法錯誤 斷句也讓人讀了很心痛 建議你沒需要不要放 或是花錢請人幫你修改
既然不需要就不用多此一舉
用不到英文的工作真的不需要英文履歷
Liviane wrote:
我想應徵超商店員超商(恕刪)

如果面試不要求英文履歷就不要放。
誠心建議,可以上網找一下所謂的英文履歷範例參考一下。
您寫出來的基本上不到履歷的程度,頂多是自我介紹,但內容也不足。
請換個角度想一下,如果你今天是面試官,你要怎麼從有限的時間跟有限的資料看出面試者的能力?
也是想練習一下英文
Kake wrote:
如果面試不要求英文履...(恕刪)
謝謝誒 人很好
Likeag6 wrote:
建議別放, 文法錯誤...(恕刪)
mike.cy23 wrote:
除了文法錯誤 斷句也...(恕刪)

可是我現在待業 真的不能再亂花錢了
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