這樣的英語自傳OK嗎?想找國際性工作

I’m Chen Junfa, born in East Taiwan, where there are mountains and rivers, in a rustic country.
I am the eldest man at home. Everything there is yet to be developed.
It is a place with a serious migration of population, but because the Internet allows information to flow, there is no distinction between rural and urban areas.At this stage, I live in Miaoli County,Taiwan with my parents.
I am full of curiosity and exploration for commercial activities, and also full of concern for the government's efforts to develop tourism.


In high school, I studied in the science and engineering group, so I have a strong ability in logical operations.
I studied in the engineering group of the Department of Industrial Engineering and Management in the junior college. In addition to the relevant professional knowledge of general industrial engineering.
At the same time, I also learned business management skills, such as: accounting, production management, international trade, statistics, etc.And also participated in the learning of current e-commerce programming, although the school scores were not among the top.But 2--3 years performance had remained moderate level.I was very fortunate to be able to successfully graduate from a strict private secondary school.
Because it is a freshwater school in the north, so I have a strong ability to adapt to temperature.


During high school, I also worked in a cram school, and was mainly responsible for accepting reservations from parents of students in the cram school for one year.After I went out of society, there was a 3C electronic store opened at home, and I worked for a few years.The work experience of the salesperson in the store let me know how to understand the customer situation in the shortest time when contacting customers.I resolve customer complaints and on-the-spot reactions, and report the situation to the supervisor in a timely manner.It is a great knowledge to let the supervisor understand the situation, and gradually found that I can handle such affairs calmly, and can handle things delicately.And to create a win-win result for customers and owners, which makes me feel very fulfilled.


And this year, I made up my mind to break away from the protection of my parents and become a newcomer in society, expecting myself to be able to stand on my own in Northern Taiwan.
And change the job track, from business to consumer, to business to business nature of work, even if there is a 180-degree change, I hope I can be competent.
In the work, I urge myself to make continuous improvement, especially the ability of listening, speaking, reading, and writing in English, and have a plan to obtain relevant language certificates.
And I am more interested in international trade. I also strengthened my international vision from newspapers and magazines to cope with the advent of globalization to enhance my competitiveness.


In the future career, I just want my performance to be perfect.The task you have been given can achieve the mission and bring more contributions to the company.And grow together with the company. Thank you for taking the time to read my autobiography, and hope to have the opportunity to have an interview with you.


The above autobiography was translated by me with a translator.My English listening is good, and I can listen to English radio ICRT in Taiwan.I can watch CNN and Bloomberg but there is no English license now.If you want a college English graduation certificate, I can provide.I was born 1980/04/05 and now 40 years old,25 to 35 years old working in 3C stores,35-40 years old working in the service industry of general service nature.