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救救我的菜英文 TOEIC

小人英文讀寫可以 說普普 聽真的薄弱 常常講Pardon pardon 故先婉拒這家知名公司的面試邀約 因我有自知之名會敗在英文尤其是聽
故委婉延展最後謝絕 待有重新開缺小人再過來面試 人事說好

小弟電郵內容如下 當然不管文法先能溝通即可 Key words have removed.

Hi Ann,

Good day.

I would like to say thank you for give me an opportunity let me
participate this interview. Download 3 documents you provided, I think the
questionnaire is very meaningful. I would like to consider more for
respond suitable answers which committing your requirement and expectancy
so that could you pls extend to 3 or 4 weeks for this interview?

In fact, here, has a trouble lot issue did not solve thoroughly so that I
cannot leave out office this month.
Second, I very regard to this interview which I think to prepare more,
including IBM products overall; how to exact response questionnaire you
provided; even exercise English listening/ speaking during this period
for qualify TOEIC exam you test. I think this is a good chance to prove me
can compete this position, this is why I request to extend 3 or 4 weeks for
this interview.

I will phone call you later and look forward to your understanding.
Thanks again for awareness. Good luck and keep in touch.


小人看了很多ptt TOEIC 文章 都是建議買書自修看 但比較不適合我
我也有傾向找家教 但1小時為基準的收費超出預算
故比較傾向去補習班補 原因無他有互動 有問題可以馬上問 也可認識不同同學彼此競爭 這是較理想的方案
有沒有哪位大大推薦南桃園有哪家補習班較好呢? 謝謝
2017-07-17 14:44 發佈
文章關鍵字 TOEIC
其實 你已經錯失機會了

算是推掉了

顆顆

文中明顯一堆中式的詞意/累贅用詞,建議最後一段直接改成這樣:

I will call you back later and look forward to hear from your
Thanks again and keep in touch.

你是應徵者,你才需要luck,幹啥反要HR good luck?? 感覺好像在詛咒HR
Eileen Justin wrote:
小人英文讀寫可以 說...(恕刪)


不痛不癢的內容一堆!
你想要表達捨摸?

感謝你,我不行?

Eileen Justin wrote:
小人英文讀寫可以 ...(恕刪)


剛好休息逛逛幫改,第一句

I would like to thank you for giving me an opportunity to participate this interview.

後面問題還不少。
Eileen Justin wrote:
小人英文讀寫可以 說普普 聽真的薄弱 常常講Pardon pardon 故先婉拒這家知名公司的面試邀約 因我有自知之名會敗在英文尤其是聽
故委婉延展最後謝絕 待有重新開缺小人再過來面試 人事說好
小弟電郵內容如下 當然不管文法先能溝通即可 Key words have removed.
Hi Ann,
Good day.
I would like to say thank you for give me an opportunity let me
participate this interview. Download 3 documents you provided, I think the
questionnaire is very meaningful. I would like to consider more for
respond suitable answers which committing your requirement and expectancy
so that could you pls extend to 3 or 4 weeks for this interview?
In fact, here, has a trouble lot issue did not solve thoroughly so that I
cannot leave out office this month.
Second, I very regard to this interview which I think to prepare more,
including IBM products overall; how to exact response questionnaire you
provided; even exercise English listening/ speaking during this period
for qualify TOEIC exam you test. I think this is a good chance to prove me
can compete this position, this is why I request to extend 3 or 4 weeks for
this interview.
I will phone call you later and look forward to your understanding.
Thanks again for awareness. Good luck and keep in touch.



我覺得這已經跟英文好不好沒有關聯了
英文差到這種程度就不應該硬要用英文回信

對不起,我講話比較直
所以我得說你的英文讀寫不是普普,而是很差...真的很差
跟你自己說的先能溝通即可差很多...

我的建議是,你可以先打中文然後用google翻譯再去修正
不然抓個免費的 Grammarly 也可以,這套小軟體會幫你找錯字還有修正文法

另外他也有chrome plugin可以安裝,試試看吧
看起來是外商公司職缺,所以才需要用英文回應。

但是一個月要把聽力練起來,有點難度,去補習班也沒那麼快,多益補習班是教聽力技巧,不是去練習,跟同學互動?想太多。用處不大。參加過三期多益補習班課程的感想。

先去買本多益試題大全,把書中附的那片CD每一題都可以聽懂比較要緊。

或是去買你喜歡的美國影集DVD,第一遍先用中文字幕把劇情看熟,第二遍看英文字幕,第三遍開始用無字幕開始看。跟著猜意思,聽不懂馬上倒帶回去再聽一次。大概三個月後聽力會增進不少。看個人天資和累積的經驗不同而定。

一個月聽懂英文新聞?去找Jeffrey 15分鐘教你聽懂英語新聞。念完再回來報告有沒有用。

不過英文文法好像也不是很好。這反而比較難救。獵人頭的專員應該很煩惱。不過應該直接找下一個面談了。
你這個還不到普通等級哦!

文法錯不少!

建議用中文回.....

不然看光到信,你就輸了......

加油,英文多看多寫會有進步的!(國中和高中英文課本拿出來多看吧!)

幫你改了一些,中間不太懂你要表達什麼SORRY!

Hi Ann,

Thanks for give me an opportunity to participate this interview. I think the questionnaire is very significant. I would like to consider more answers that could commit your requirement. Thus, could you extend four weeks for this interview?

In fact, there have some problems need to solve in the office, so I cannot leave my job in this month.
Secondly, I really regard this interview that I have to arrange more contents, including IBM products
自己在寫一下,看不太懂……………
I will call you later and look forward to hearing from you soon.

Eileen Justin wrote:
小人英文讀寫可以 說...(恕刪)

三年都不一定救得起來
不是我行看不起人,我也差
而是說,語文難短期得到長足的進步

Eileen Justin wrote:
小人英文讀寫可以 ...(恕刪)


可憐的樓主

只是想秀一下英文水平
就被匹到一無是處
我想應該會信心全失吧

世界上就是有種人
發現了一個後起新秀,就卯起來打壓
目的就是怕新人搶走他的機會

我不會英文
但我告訴你
以沒出國留學的人來比
你已經很棒了
看的出你下過不少功夫
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