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8/5更新 Is my English good enough for an english-related job

Hello, I am a student studying in a private university in Tamsui. I am concerning about my future career. It seems science and engineering degrees are better than Liberal Arts degrees when it comes to job hunting. But my mathematics ability is just too poor.
So I want to ask you whether my English is good enough to support me to find a English-related job. I think you can tell how good or bad my English is by reading my composition.

I accept non-English jobs but English is my only specialty. I major in English and I have a strong desire that I have to excel in this particular field.
I did not do well though. I only ranked the 3rd in my class, which means someone is better that I. And I am in a private school, not to mention those who study in national ones and who are even better than the 1st in my class.

I stronly feel that my English is not good enough for a english-related job or other management-related job. After all, I only passed the intermediate level of GEPT. And I am a shy person. However, I will try my best to sharpen my language command.

I have to admit that I checked the dictionary to ensure that my dicction is correct, from which you can tell where my english proficiency lies. (In my opinion, I am not good enough)

I think what I am using is Globish, not genuine English. Because it is for non-native speakers, it is much easier for us to learn. So English can not even be my specialty. I don't have any advantage over work place.

To you, who have already entered society, my remark may seem childish. I accept that I am not a mature person. I will think of your opinions as a guidance.

And lastly......要砲可以砲小力一點嗎?

啊!!! 我的英文好爛阿.... 大家看到我好多錯誤 我真是辜負我英文系的身分
我現在只是大一升大二 還沒出社會喔
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8/5

謝謝大家給我的意見悠 我又寫了一篇 可能會比上一篇好 交作文的話我會交這篇 雖然還是比不上台大拉
我寫的不一定對 我只是根據我看DISCOVERY的印象寫的

After I read the comments that you guys gave me, I was a bit frustrated. Some said I could not be compared to students in national taiwan university. It was 100% true. I typed another composition. I hope it is more organized and structured.


AK-47

Hardly paralleled by other weapons, the Ak-47 is the most deadly and notorius killing machine in the world. Kalashinikov, above 80, was a soldier in russian army. When he was a toddler, he liked to tear up mechanical gadgets, scrutinize the inside, and then put them together. It was this kind of exploration mentality that paved the way for his fame of being the creator of AK-47.

AK-47 is by all accounts not a sophesticated weapon. There are a lot of gaps betweem every component of the the weapon, which affects its accuracy. However, is this the main flaw of AK-47? It turns out to be the other way around. The gaps betweem components prevents the weapon from getting jamed. When it is soaked in mud or water, these gaps allows you to remove the dirt quickly. These gaps also provide large space for swelling due to heat produced by gunpowder, which makes it able to fire bullet storm to its prey.
It is also cheap for maintenance since its structure is much simpler.

AK-47s are equiped by people around the world. From soldiers, freedom champions, to terrorists. Supposedly, there are 1 billion Ak-47s on earth including knockoffs, which means out of every 6 people, one person wields it.
The high penetration rate makes Ak-47s the most infamous weapons that have claimed millions of lives. The AK-47 is the creator of turmoil, and his creator, Kalashinikov, truely the trader of death.
2013-08-04 10:14 發佈
文章關鍵字 8/5
Still fail
文章看起來怪怪的,不會講耶!

yatungj wrote:
Still fai...(恕刪)


我果然還是不行嗎... 怪怪的地方在哪?

數學不及格 wrote:
Hello, I a...(恕刪)


Your skill is good enough to wirte everyday English email at work.

There are some weird things like 2F said.

For the "Math is too low" part, I think you meant "poor". Poor and low are not exactly the same, they are quite different. The good thing about your English is that even if it's not 100% correct, people can still guess what you meant exactly. And people don't use "Because" at the beginging of the sentence. I think this is one of the things that my junior high school teacher told me.


yatungj wrote:
Still fai...(恕刪)


Do or Do Not. There is no try!!!

-Yoda

樓主的文章怎麼好像是口語中翻英?

cs113ta wrote:
Your skill...(恕刪)

thank you. making this kind of mistake..... that is really shame on me.

數學不及格 wrote:
a english-related job



基本上還行。小錯是有,但是要再加油
樓主,您連題目都錯了,
還是閉門苦練一陣子再出來吧!

Is my English good enough for an English-related job?
數學不及格 wrote:
Hello, I a...(恕刪)
I have to admit that I checked the dictionary to ensure that my dicction is correct, from which you can tell where my english proficiency lies. (In my opinion, I am not good enough)




主要的問題是你的文章落落長,沒有重點,又沒有結構
重覆的東西太多,句型單一,其他文法上和習慣用法上的
東西就不用說了。
感覺應該和台清交的理工科的畢業生差不多吧?

我就是愛拍照 wrote:
主要的問題是你的文章...(恕刪)

跟台清交差不多 我其實還滿開心的= = 畢竟我學校沒有很好
其實我們作文老師就有說我落落長 真的要寫文章還是會盡量縮減拉 至於習慣用法 我想除非出國走一趟 否則不會懂的
謝謝你的指教喔
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