MewTube wrote:
whom are already in the workforce(恕刪)
Cambridge 好像沒有在用whom了的樣子....
好像是這一兩年的事情
數學不及格 wrote:
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Hello, I am a student currently studying in a private university in Tamsui. It seems like majoring in subjects related in Science and Engineering are better than majoring in subjects related Liberal Arts when it comes to job hunting these days, but I didn't choose to go down that path because my mathematics is just too bad to be studying in any math-related fields. I am concerned about my job opportunities upon graduation.
I am majoring in English so I'd like to find an English-related job, but I feel I am not doing well enough. I am currently ranked the third in my class, which means there is two more people who are better than me in terms of GPA. To make the matter worse, I face competitions from those studying at national universities around Taiwan. Those people should be better than the two who rank higher than me in my class.
I feel that my English is not good enough for a job that requires using English as a first language. I only passed the intermediate level of GEPT and I am a shy person. However, I will try my best to learn the language.
As of now, I still have to check the dictionary to ensure that my word choice is correct. I know I still have a long path to go.
You should be able to tell my English abilities by now and comment on if an English-related job will be suitable for me. I admit that I am not a matured person, so I will take your opinions as guidance for me to succeed.
i dont have much time to do a complete overhaul for you, but for me, your original essay is a fail. (sorry to be so harsh, but im trying to help you here) your grammar and word choice mistakes are understandable because you're not a native speaker, but your essay's not making sense. you need to work on your logic and organization. don't think of one idea and put it down and then switch to another one. it's confusing
billybeartku wrote:
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I reckon that my composition is more like a colloquial introduction to myself rather than a formal essay. In composition lessons, my mistakes have been indicated by my teacher, which is mainly being redundant.
As for being a selfish person, indeed, I am. It is because I have to repay the huge amount of debt of my family after entering the work place. Money became my priority. Maybe you would say it is wrong. For me, money matters.
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