11 o'clock wrote:
Thank you for review my resume.
恕刪)
Thank you for reviewing my resume.
I am writing to apply for the position of X (工作)
I am graduated from (name of your school) and my major is civil engineering.
I like photography reading books, cooking and gardening on holiday
Since i want to be a boutique sales, i learn English seriously.
Maybe it is not fluent enough but i try my best to improve it.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you for you consideration and time.
Yours faithfully
(Name)
ps 在香港留港
Mel黎 wrote:Are you serious? Hiring managers will trash your resume in US if you use that opening.
建議開頭用To whom it may concern...(恕刪)
It's most likely OK for casual mass internal email.
But for resume purpose it's like saying:
whatever, I don't care enough to know whoever reads my shit.
Someone actual told me about this before, I thought it was a joke.
It all depends on the company and what circumstances the OP is applying under.
I confess I made the assumption that they don't know who they're sending the letter to (hence that all encompassing 嗨~). This is fine if you're resume dropping on a school career website, how do you know who's reading it? "Dear HR of so-and-so company" sounds even odder.
But if the OP does know who they're sending the letter to, then of course your path is the way to take.
Mel黎 wrote:So I was right, you weren't joking. I bet the cover letter I heard about was from someone from Asia as well then. It's probably customary in Asia, but seriously that's pretty much the attitude you are giving out, I don't care. Just a thought, maybe one should send one to Apple - they would love it.
Hiring man...(恕刪)
It would be simple and most efficient to write, Company XXX - XXX Departmetn or Dear HR recruiter. basically just go by title.
Hiring managers will most like trash the cover letter after 2 seconds of skimming regardless. Actually, if you open with "With whom it might concern" they might frame it and mass e-mail to everyone for a laugh, mission accomplished
Millions of cover letter templates are out there, just copy off them.
I personally dislike letters that address my position. It feels very, as you say, impersonal and uninterested. But hey, it's a matter of personal preference and 每個公司都不同. I think we can both agree that just saying 嗨~ is not the thing to do.
I agree, tons of templates out there, OP should really just copy off of them.
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