以下是我自己翻譯的英文自傳
因為我的程度尚屬初級
所以寫出來的東西非常簡單
但不知道是不是有不通順的地方
希望有專業人士能幫我修飾一下
但不用修的太完美
因為我在語言那邊~填寫我的程度只是初級
(我想任職的新工作並沒有強調英文一定要多行~我會貼英文履歷表是因為希望讓他們覺得我不會因為不會就放棄~我還是會去做~雖然不是很好~但會力求改善)
Hello~
I graduated from civil engineering
at the building.
Holidays
i like photography、read books、cook、flower arrangement、gardening.
Because i want to be a boutique sales
so i study english very seriously
now is'nt good
but i hope i will say english is better
Thank you for reading my resume
Wrong place to invites advice.
以上，麻煩專業人士幫我稍微修飾一下文法
謝謝。
下一個~
qqlulala wrote:
Hello~
I graduated from civil engineering
at the building.
Holidays
i like photography、read books、cook、flower arrangement、gardening.
Because i want to be a boutique sales
so i study english very seriously
now is'nt good
but i hope i will say english is better
Thank you for reading my resume
Wrong place to invites advice.
...(恕刪)
I graduated from civil engineering
at the building.
怪怪的 也許 building & civil engineering ?
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i like photography、read books、cook、flower arrangement、gardening.
i like photography、books-reading、cooking、flower arrangement、gardening.
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Because i want to be a boutique sales
so i study english very seriously
Because i want to be a boutique salesman
so i study english very hard.
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now is'nt good
but i hope i will say english is better
though now isn't good
but i hope i will speak english better
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Wrong place to invites advice.
Wrong place to invite advices.
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不過 整個還是怪怪的.
烘培王 wrote:
履歷的重點是
1. 學歷
2. 經歷
3. 專長
Hello開頭就很不好了, 去google一下英文履歷範例整個重寫過吧.
+1
英文程度與自傳內容是兩回事，你的自傳篇幅過短且言之無物。若是英文不佳，建議先以中文撰寫自傳後再翻譯為英文。
arravera2 wrote:
Because i want to be a boutique salesman
so i study english very hard.
英文文法沒有「because...so...」這樣的結構，「因為...所以...」是中文的用法。
P.S.自傳是個人自述的故事，真偽也只有自己知，所以尾句不用加上有誤請指正之類的話。
行路難，難重陳。行路難，難於山，險於水。行路難，不在水，不在山，只在人情反覆間。
I graduated from civil engineering
at 學校
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種花種草,用gradening就可以代表一切了
i like photography、reading、cooking、gardening.
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這2句的連接性在那裡??我想要當女裝店員,所以去學英文??
i study english very hard for a good boutique sales
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i hope my english to be better future
thank you for your time.
沒有經歷請寫出打工或在學校那個科糸有興趣等等
自傳不要自曝其短,什麼有錯云云
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