菲律賓謀殺我漁民事件，英文稿請大家校正

Mel黎 wrote:
A total of 52 bullet holes were found in the Taiwanese fishing boat.
This proves that the Philippines coastguard did not commit involuntary manslaughter, this was a deliberate murder.

Mel黎 wrote:
很高興跟您交流
嗯.. 因為我認為我用evidence指的是 "total", 而total是單數
雖然提到的是複數名詞bullet holes, 但是用total綜合起來後就變單數
所以用 "this"

Evidence的複數還是evidence
所以依然是 This proves

TimSmith wrote:
there were total 52 bullet holes found in the Taiwan fishing boat.,

these evidences, bullet holes proved that the Philippines coastguards did commit

manslaughter, it was a definitely murder...


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this = 單數.,these = 複數, 52是複數..所以一定要用 these

prove 是動詞,要把它當名詞...也可以,只是沒有用 evidences 這個名詞來得直接...

coastguard(s).,因為不只一位海巡人員涉入.,最好加個 S 在後...

Mel黎 wrote:
中文造詣匪淺, 希望我解釋的清楚

螢幕花到 wrote:
你好像是想表達你中文...(恕刪)

TimSmith wrote:
所有文法老師都指 these的用法比較正確,要不就用 the..

total,不會影響單複數的....

螢幕花到 wrote:
你這是台灣英語
越改越錯

Kisd wrote:
他們有這麼先進

船上有行船影像紀錄器嗎??...(恕刪)

TimSmith wrote:
那...換你來改改看...(恕刪)