有人想寫信給jobs 嗎？ (第3頁)

enzoferrarifx60
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2010-06-17 9:31

TimSmith wrote:
非找砸,你的文章,實...(恕刪)

我幫你重打一份,你看看,好不好?

Dear Jobs:

In Taiwan, People really admire the product, iPad. --> In Taiwan, people really admire the iPad (you don't need "product")

The product is an amazing design. --> This product "has" an amazing design.

It brings a very convenient internet communication.--> ok, nothing wrong with it. but I prefer "It brings us a very convenient way of internet communication." or "It brings the convenience to the internet communication"

Especially, iPad can have 10 hours long-life battery,--> Especially, iPad can "provide" 10 hours "of" long battery life.

and over 10 hundreds of Apps. --> and over ten hundred Apps.(ok, it's way over a thousand Apps. I guess the original post meant "thousands of apps".)

No offense, but I think your English is as bad as mine.

TimSmith

TimSmith
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2010-06-17 10:01

我寫的,文法是沒有錯的,用詞只是大家不一樣而已.,
意思是雷同的.,

但你的造句..,光文法就錯了很多.,詞意是不通的.,
你是英文本科??

要不要拿我的文,跟你的文去給你老師修一修?
看誰文意比較通順

還有,不要把我正確的文法,改成錯誤的.,

KoserChang

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2010-06-17 10:26

講話不能客氣點嗎?XD
不就是一封信

imalvinx

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2010-06-17 10:29

enzoferrarifx60 wrote:
In Taiwan, People really admire the product, iPad. --> In Taiwan, people really admire the iPad (you don't need "product")...(恕刪)

看到用 admire 這個字, 口中的飲料差點噴出來

TimSmith

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2010-06-17 10:42

imalvinx wrote:
口中的飲料差點噴出來

是嗎?有膽寫一篇出來看看嗎?
只怕,你也沒那能耐...!!

真脆瓜

真脆瓜
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2010-06-17 11:22

賈伯斯應該很忙吧

我想只要很簡單的寫：請問賈伯伯何時台灣會上市 ipad

然後署名寫一個五歲的小女孩

我想可能賈伯伯會有童心的馬上就開放吧。。。

這種事也不是第一次發生

不然你可能只會得到一個

not yet

sent from my iPad

之類的回答

http://senmingkao.blogspot.tw/

konois

konois
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2010-06-17 11:25

小弟覺得有幾個重點可以讓jobs回信..

1.就是盡量簡單、不長篇大論，最好重點式、條列式寫題就好

2.措詞不要太婉轉，請直接點

3.如果後面有sent from my iphone也不錯

至於為什麼會這樣建議...大概是有去信的經驗吧XDDD

美食、旅遊、設計與生活，可能還有點敗家：http://www.konois.idv.tw/myblog/

forthewin

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2010-06-17 11:30

Dear Steve,

First of all, I would like to thank you for bringing such wonderful products to life and revolutionizing the computer industry with great designs and user-friendliness altogether.

However, for somebody living in Taiwan, I do find it increasingly difficult to accept that Taiwan, a country among the world's top thirty economies, sometimes get the shaft when it comes to buying some of Apple's finest products. Products like iPads & iPhones are typically unavailable until later, in spite of the fact that some of them are manufactured by Foxconn in facilities nearby in China.

In addition, the Taiwanese government has this nasty habit of further delaying Apple products from sale until they pass the electromagnetic compliance (EMC) tests, which can take as long as five weeks. Adding that to the lack of Apple direct retail stores around, it takes a lot away from the whole shopping experience and satisfaction.

I know that the chances of this message reaching your iPhone or even your desk are slim, but nevertheless I hope that some of these fundamental issues can be addressed, either by prearranging EMC testing to be done prior to product release or bumping up release dates in Taiwan at least at the same time as Hong Kong and China.

Thank you for your attention and I look forward to hearing back from you.

Sincerely,

xxx

JFSCOTT

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2010-06-17 12:06

若大家都沒共識哪一封英文信件內容最好，那就使用人海戰術吧，多寄一點吧，一人一封信

這是請求信，又不是討債信。

我想每個人都會害怕事件被鬧大，Jobs也是一樣

最好Youtube上有影片來宣傳台灣人需要iPad & iPhone 4的欲望影片

讓全世界都知道現在的台灣消費者都想買到最新蘋果的產品~~~而不是貴的要死的水貨與經銷商貨

幸福人生的關鍵就在於你有追求目標的熱忱，而且知道每天都可以針對這些目標有所進展。

zeroplus

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2010-06-17 12:07

Jobs: what? guarantee what?

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